tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8806244977869265498.post8302373830564360117..comments2024-03-12T05:19:17.262-04:00Comments on Oasis for YA: WRITER WEDNESDAY: writing a fight sceneJessie Harrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581727105030086814noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8806244977869265498.post-18722399462913242792010-11-10T21:08:04.909-05:002010-11-10T21:08:04.909-05:00your post makes me feel like such a girlie-girl &a...your post makes me feel like such a girlie-girl & I've never really thought of myself like that before... although now that I think about it, I don't like dirt, or bugs, or pain. Yeah, fight scenes = not my strong suit.Jessie Harrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581727105030086814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8806244977869265498.post-67860733284541555882010-11-10T17:13:44.883-05:002010-11-10T17:13:44.883-05:00In fight scenes you need to include grunts, spitti...In fight scenes you need to include grunts, spitting of blood, cuts, aches, so the reader can feel it too. Love fight scenes! it's my strong points, because i have a black belt in MA and we did a whole lot of sparring. in the beginning it was pads then it was raw with just mouth pieces and some gloves.Natalie Deckerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09420337655010987555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8806244977869265498.post-22957330055393980052010-11-10T14:25:22.551-05:002010-11-10T14:25:22.551-05:00Oh, yeah, this is a great post! I totally needed t...Oh, yeah, this is a great post! I totally needed this. (My MC has a few fights coming up.) ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8806244977869265498.post-27913410657557817362010-11-10T13:20:05.142-05:002010-11-10T13:20:05.142-05:00Now this I really liked!! Nicely done.Now this I really liked!! Nicely done.S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8806244977869265498.post-6416473167339288192010-11-10T13:06:09.287-05:002010-11-10T13:06:09.287-05:00Great post! I LOVE writing fight scenes! Love them...Great post! I LOVE writing fight scenes! Love them! And this is amazing advice!Colene Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8806244977869265498.post-91615179540661456662010-11-10T10:36:15.487-05:002010-11-10T10:36:15.487-05:00Excellent post! I have a fight scene to do at som...Excellent post! I have a fight scene to do at some point today. *evillaugh* This should be fun!Jus Accardohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13666183648679542805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8806244977869265498.post-47758921304374581162010-11-10T09:01:17.168-05:002010-11-10T09:01:17.168-05:00Very helpful. I HATE writing fight scenes because ...Very helpful. I HATE writing fight scenes because it always sounds cheesy to me. Maybe these terms will give my fights a bit more bite now. :)Pam Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09872183610393667619noreply@blogger.com