Wednesday, December 08, 2010

Writer's Wednesday: Beta Benefits

Last week I finished up a beta read of a friend's 105K word novel.  Today I dropped into the first pages group over at YALitChat to offer a critique.  And I wonder... am I mad?  Do I not have other things to do than read other people's work just because my current novel is sitting with its own set of betas?
Work snatched from Cabepfir on DeviantArt.com

Of course.  But truth be told, I not only enjoy reading others' work, but I learn so much by doing it.  So I figured I'd share with you some of the benefits, and encourage you to help out a fellow author by offering up your own unique insights.

Learning to See the Forest for the Trees.  It's one thing when you read a blog post that tells you to make sure every scene you write advances the story.  It's another thing entirely to put that advice into practice.  But by beta reading an entire novel for someone else -- for which you are presumably detached -- it's WAY easier to see which scenes are unnecessary or bogging down a story.  You learn to feel it in the way your eyes glaze over and you start to skim.  And once you have a sense of it from someone else's work, it's much easier to go back to your own work and be critical of each and every scene.

Recognizing Realistic Dialog.  Formal or unnatural language doesn't stick out so much when you write it yourself.  You've got your characters in your head and you can probably hear them speaking, so it all works for you.  But when you beta, you come at dialog with a fresh set of eyes.  Those times a speaker should've used a contraction (I'm sure) instead of more formal language (I am sure), will stand out to you like a sore thumb.  You can then apply what you've learned when you go back to your novel.

Understanding What's Meant by "Hook" and How to Do It (or Not).  Have you ever been beat reading for someone, gotten to the end, and thought "so what?"  Either the story wasn't for you -- which happens when we read in a genre we don't really like* -- or there was no hook.  The next time this happens to you, take time to figure out what's wrong with the story in your mind. Did it start too soon?  Not enough action?  Too much action before you care about the characters?  If you can identify both what not to do and how to fix it, you'll be that much closer to creating a hook in your own story.

Getting Slapped with Backstory.  Yet another one of those fatal flaws that it's so much easier to see in others' work.  Like, when the plot opens with two paragraphs of action and then the MC has a two-page flashback explaining how they got to that point. Now, in your own book, this is all critical information that YOU have to know as the author.  But as a beta reader, you can learn to tell when an author has done an info-dump versus gently winding in backstory.  Again, you can learn techniques in both the good and the bad.

There are numerous other benefits, of course.  Making friends, forming a support team, learning the ropes from someone more experienced.  But anytime you can learn and improve your own skills by helping someone else, what's not to love??
And since we at the Oasis are all about DEFINITIONS on our Writer's Wednesdays... have you ever been curious about where the term "beta reader" came from?  According to wikipedia:

The term "beta" is an appropriation from the software industry which uses the terms "alpha" and "beta" for software that are internal works in progress and publicly released tests, respectively (though a "beta" version may still be tested internally).

Now you know.  So, what have your beta experiences been like?  Did you find you took away insights or was it one-sided?

* Of course, if a book is exceptionally well-written with a strong hook, it probably won't matter that you're reading outside your genre.  Take Across the Universe for example.  Even though I really don't care for sci-fi or dystopian books that much, when I read the first chapter online, I WANTED to know what happens next.  Talk about a hook!

Tuesday, December 07, 2010

TUESDAY TUNES

Some stores and stations have been playing Christmas music since Halloween. The first jingle might elicit a smile, an "Aw. Isn't that sweet?" It also might rankle, pull a deep-seated growl of "too damned early for this stuff." Then, after Thanksgiving, the onslaught begins in earnest.

Does the repetitious droning of Christmas songs bring out The Grinch in you? Or, are you the one who whistles along while you work?

For me, it depends on the song. Some songs? Nails on the chalkboard. Others? I always hum with. So, out of Seasonal Author Awareness (no, it's not real, I made it up :P ) I asked my Oasis sisters where they weighed in on the like/dislike song list.

LIKES:
  • Jessie says, "I don't know that I have just one, but I recently bought Andrea Bocelli's new Christmas CD and all the songs on it are lovely. Even "Jingle Bells" sounds angelic coming out of that man's mouth."
  • Nikki's favorite is Jingle Bell Rock.
  • Jessica actually likes one I am not fond of. (Funny, those are the roles Jessie and I usually fall into *snort*) J.A. says, "Christmas Shoes is probably my favorite. It's made me cry every time I hear it."
  • Sheri's moved by the Little Drummer Boy. "I swear I tear up every year when I hear that."
  • I'm a sucker for Silent Night, by Mannheim Steamroller, but what brings me to tears every single time I hear it? Soldier's Silent Night.


DISLIKES:
  • Jessie's feeling run down by Da Yuppers (sadly they hale from my state) and their song Grandma Got Run Over by a Reindeer (ARGH!!!! quote from Jessie)
  • Jessica is feeling the love for Feliz Navidad. ("Don't know why I hate it, but it makes me want to run screaming and I ALWAYS flip the station or whatever anytime I hear it.")
  • Sheri says. "I despise that stupid Batman song and that new Spongebob one. A sharp bristle pad wouldn't be rough enough to scratch my ears when I hear those. And as much as I love Elvis, would people stop making Christmas renditions of his songs. They butcher them. Should be illegal. Just sayin'."
  • I'm annually, perennially, eternally loathing I Want a Hippopotamus for Christmas. Everyone knows. They tease me. I talk to Santa and eye their present levels...
  • Nikki's least favorite is All I want for Christmas is My Two Front Teeth.


Sorry Nikki... I had to. :P
So, dear Oasis Seekers, where do you weigh in? Hate a holiday tune? Love one?? Please share!

Monday, December 06, 2010

Monday Sanctuary: Meditating New Ideas


I'll admit that the last week has been INSANE for me. My daughter had opening night on Friday at a local junior theater (they are doing 18 shows in 16 days) and last week was a whirlwind of dress rehearsals. Couple that with orthodontist appointments, homework, holiday shopping, working, writing, cooking, cleaning ... well some of those things just didn't happen! Mostly the writing and the editing didn't happen.

Luckily Jessie and I just sent off our manuscript to some beta readers for critique - and so I get some time off while I wait in limbo for those comments.

Time off from a project doesn't stop me from thinking or being creative. I've spent a lot of time this week meditating about new ideas, and thinking back on some of the old idemy review of The Mockingbirdsas I've conjured. For example, as I tried to fall asleep last night, I contemplated on Friday and how Daisy ended up writing about a situation that happened to her. I wondered if I could pull from any of my life-experiences. I've yet to tackle contemporary YA, but I think it would be interesting to write about a darker topic...

So, my point for today's Monday Sanctuary is that even in this hectic holiday season you can find time to be creative and meditate - whether its on your current WIP or a future project.

Wishing you lots of time for meditation!
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