Showing posts with label writer's wednesday. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writer's wednesday. Show all posts

Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Writer's Wednesday: Realistic vs. Believable



This week, I'm revising an old manuscript. And I've been thinking about a piece of writing advice I heard some time ago at a conference (SCBWI Florida--the next conference is coming up next week!!!!): Your characters/their actions/dialogue/plot have to be BELIEVABLE but not necessarily REALISTIC.

I've heard this before, and it's usually emphasized when discussing dialogue. You know, the whole, "Real people talk with lots of ums and uhs and stops and starts. No one wants to read that." (Which is completely true, by the way. Great dialogue is believable without being truly realistic.)

But I've also run into this as an issue in my manuscripts as it relates to character actions/reactions. It seems there is a fine line between realistic behavior and believable behavior. Particularly when it relates to information the reader knows and the protagonist doesn't.

For example, in one of my old manuscripts (a paranormal), there is something strange going on. The protagonist doesn't like it/has a bad feeling, but REALISTICALLY, there is no reason for him to be truly alarmed. It's weird, but he has no reason to think that anything really bad is happening--until it gets really bad.

At least, that's how I want it to come across. But I've had readers question why he doesn't do something sooner. And the only reason I can think of for this is that they, as the reader, have read the description of the book. They KNOW something really bad is happening. So they want the protag to act sooner, and they have trouble BELIEVING that he wouldn't.

Anyway, I'm struggling with this line in my writing right now. Have you ever run into this problem? Have you ever read a book and had trouble with believability because the character was perhaps too realistic?

Wednesday, May 01, 2013

Writer's Wednesday: Have you been a good CP lately?


As I think back on how I got started in writing, and what made me better, I've got to think that critiquing others' work was huge.  It wasn't because I knew so much and had so much to offer other starting writers.  Not at all.  It was that by examining the work of others, I was able to find flaws that I might would have overlooked in my own work.

Things like the dreaded passive voice, annoying dialog tags, overusing a character's name in dialog, and a deluge of adjectives.  When we are writing, these things can all sound really good in our own heads.  For example, when we say:

"I know, Beth, but this is serious."

"I hear you, James."

We often think we're adding extra emphasis or gravity to our words.  But when we read it in others' work, we realize that all it does is add words that characters would probably never say in real life.

So here's my Writer's Wednesday advice for those of you who aren't regularly critiquing another's work: give it a try!  Join the First Pages group on YALitChat (it's free).  Ask a writer friend if they need another set of eyes.  Or even just pick up the book you're reading and pretend you've been hired to edit it.  What would you change?  What bothers you?

Now... how can you change that for the better in your own writing?

Thursday, March 14, 2013

Whoseewhatsit Thursday ~ using Pinterest

I know many writers try to avoid encountering more distractions -- ya know, those things that keep you from the business of actually writing your story -- but here are three very good reasons you should consider spending "some" time on Pinterest.

1.  Inspiration is at your fingertips!
I know you've got an amazing world crafted in your brain, but sometimes you just need a little prompting on the details.  For instance, if you're writing about a lace wedding gown but want to get some more ideas of what an all-lace gown might look like in your wildest dreams, just type in "lace wedding gown" in the search and you'll get 100s of results - everything from vintage to romantic to downright sexy.
Or maybe you need an idea of a fantasy underwater world.  A search using those exact terms turns up some amazing results.  Try it!

2.  Use it to store your ideas and inspiration.
Have you ever seen something online and thought, "that would be perfect for my book?"  Well, now you can quickly pin it to an inspiration board so you have it to come back to and reference in the future.  Boards are also a good way to store a variety of ideas and choose between them side-by-side.  So say you're trying to envision the perfect front porch for your characters to kiss on, you can pin a bunch of porches you find on line and then decide between them when they're all in one place.  When you think about it this way, you'll be saving time!

3.  You can find or connect with readers here.
If you're an already published author, Pinterest is another possible place to find and connect with readers.  You can have boards related to your book and pin everything from your dream cast, to inspiration pieces for location, to what a specific outfit a character wore looks like. Today's readers expect lots of bonus material, and this is one way to give it to them.  For example, I have this board on Destined.  It's got the pictures I used for inspiration when I was writing, an updated dream cast, and some pictures of Eros and Psyche that I love by some talented artists out there.  Plus, if you put the right key words in the description under your book title, you just might find some more readers who are interested in your theme or genre.  It can't hurt!!

For more inspiration, check out Ann's awesome board for Broken.
Sheri's chic board for Marked Beauty.
Sean's inside peek into Poltergeeks.
Nikki's inspiration for Archipelago.
Larissa's board of stunning characters.
Jessica's brief but alluring look inside Renegade.
And Judy... well, she just received her invitation so she can come join the rest of us slackers, er, inspiration seekers.

What ways have you found to use Pinterest productively as an author?

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Dissecting a Bestselling Novelist's First Chapter


Readers suffer from instant gratification. Don't they? I know I do as a reader. But as a writer, how do I curb the appetites of my readers without giving away too much or gooping up my openings with backstory and exposition?

In Meg Cabot's ABANDON, there is a small chapter to open the story. Seeing how this story is based off the Greek myth of Hades and Persephone, Cabot uses this page to give some facts about that story through her MC’s eyes. I decided to use this story as an outline because a lot of authors will use this technique. But for this exercise, we’ll skip it and start where Cabot’s story truly begins.
~CHAPTER ONE~
Cabot introduces the main character to her readers by telling one significant fact that the entire story will hinge upon, which has to do with the MC. Then the reader is thrust into the here and now of the character’s current world.

**For instance: Let's say you have a boy who has a fear of heights. You could open the story anywhere with him doing anything, but somewhere in there SHOW, don't tell, that fear. Later...at the story's climax, the reader is gripping his/her pillow fearful the boy won't be able to save the long, lost dog from the edge of the cliff because the reader is already aware of the boy's fear. The reader also knows the boy must save this dog because there is a secret hidden in the dog's collar which can help him save the universe.

{Lame, but you get my point. Don't over do it. Just SHOW by a brief mention.}

Moving on - Cabot chooses to use a conversation next. She lets her MC sprinkle information about the where and why of what’s going on around her. In this case, it’s a family gathering. As the conversation progresses, the MC sprinkles more thoughts about her family, friends, observations of her world, and what brought her to this place and time. It’s a mix of showing (through the conversation) and subtle telling which always seems to be twined within the MC’s pain/thoughts/emotions. The reader also gets a solid feel for who the MC is: her disposition, likes & dislikes, even hopes and dreams.

Cabot is able to share her MC’s feelings about family members through subtle glances or gestures (shifting in chairs etc…) during the conversation. The MC doesn't have to be obvious or come right out and tell the reader. It's there through her subtle actions and reactions to her world around her.

Finally, the MC has one major reactions to her surroundings, changing the scene, it's mood, and purpose. This setup gives just enough and moves the reader to chapter two, where action will take place and some of the questions left unanswered by chapter one are then answered.

So what did we learn?

Wednesday, January 09, 2013

We Can't All Be Hemingway ~ And Here's Why You Shouldn't Try

Ernest Hemingway.  Perhaps one of the more infamous authors of our time.  Known for drinking too much, marrying too often, traveling extensively, and living the good life in his Key West, Wyoming, and Cuban homes.  It almost sounds idyllic (well, perhaps not the serial marriage part) until you consider that Hemingway took his own life.  Before that, he was infamous for treating people badly.  He suffered crippling pain as a result of multiple accidents.  And he was treated with electro-convulsive therapy for his paranoid depression.
As I consider Hemingway's life, it occurs to me how much times have changed.  Today's author need not drown in whiskey or travel the world to tell a great story.  They need not be listless or on the verge of suicide to go down in history.  The whole notion of the tortured artist has almost become a bygone of another era.

Which is not to say that tortured souls are not some of the better story tellers out there.  All you have to do is a read a few stories on the Dear Team Me blog to know that a great number of authors have suffered traumatic or heart breaking experiences.  They draw on these experiences, heal themselves through their characters and often help their readers.

But most authors today are ordinary folks.  They are the moms you see in grocery lines, herding kids and trying not to dump their purses.  They are the business men who sneak into their offices at night to pen a thriller they can't get out of their heads.  Today's authors don't necessarily make a career of their writing, and they certainly don't use the label of "author" as an excuse to live life with no regard for who they harm along the way.  Today's authors are good people, who help one another, and who have been forced to climb outside of their shells by the world of technology.

So even though I am sort of sad to think that the days of Hemingway-style novelists are long-since passed (after all, who doesn't fantasize at least about the extensive traveling and multiple homes part?), it's probably for the best.  I couldn't appreciate today's community of authors more.  And when it occurs to me that we can't all be Hemingway, I realize that's a good thing.  I'm not sure I'd wish his life - or misery - on anyone.

And so I wonder ... if you could trade places with Hemingway, would you?  Would being such an esteemed novelist (not to mention well-to-do partier) be worth the anguish?  Or are you glad that writing today is looked at more as catharsis and creates a community of healing?

Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Writer's Wednesday: What's Your MC Thankful For?

Since we're coming up on Thanksgiving, I thought we might try a little exercise to force you to peer more closely inside your main character and ask: what is she thankful for?

I know my own list of blessings this year includes my family, my health, my job and my Oasis sisters.  But I imagine my teen characters would have quite a different sounding list.

For instance (and Nikki, you can correct me if I'm wrong), our main character in Beneath the Surface - Wren - would probably be thankful for these things:

* her BFF, Andi
* her iPhone
* being elected captain of the tennis team for her senior year
* speed boats
* her parents' extended vacation
* a hot new boyfriend, whose sweet personality makes up for his untamed Greek eyebrows and over-sensitive nose

What about your main character? Is she thankful to make it through a day without a ghost bothering her?  Is she thankful her dad survived a car accident?  Or is it something more shallow, like being thankful she was homecoming queen?

Whatever it is, knowing what sorts of things your character appreciates in life will help you understand her better.  Feel free to share your list below, or leave a list of things your thankful for this year.  Either way, we're thankful for YOU!!

Wishing you a blessed and abundant Thanksgiving!

Wednesday, July 11, 2012

The Silver Lining with Flaws

There's definitely a difference between unfinished business at the end of a scene, chapter, or novel and a cliffhanger with no closure.


Life doesn't come complete with smooth edges. The events of our lives that mold and change us (and our characters as realistic and relatable) don't have neat endings. But life does come with balance. There are always new questions and answers forming in each event, bringing some closure, filling a void, or motivating changes - the silver lining. 


That's what we as writers need to do.

We all want to write an un-put-downable story, want the reader to ache at the thought of putting our books down. Leaving the reader with a sense of desire at the end of each scene and chapter is key, all with keeping it plausible - sometimes subtle, sometimes dramatic. How do we create such a draw within a reader that makes them peek ahead into the next chapter even though it's 2:00 AM? What makes that step irresistible?


Each scene and chapter must end on a note of character intrigue; whether physical or emotional, it does not matter. Accomplishing this from the end of the first scene will slowly create that inner desire in a reader to know your character and care. This will influence a more natural forward movement of your story, creating escalating tension - almost like mini climaxes. Now, that doesn't mean dragging the reader through tiny information dumps, because that's just boring. Show (don't tell) your creation by actively sprinkling important elements about your plot and subplots, your story world and characters to close out scenes and chapters. 


Present the reader with tidbits of new information, peeling the flawed layers of your characters' and their world in interesting ways. Your readers will become part of the silver lining of your story. Your characters' desires will become theirs. The world you create will slowly become real.  


In Beautiful Chaos by Kami Garcia & Margaret Stohl, they use a subtle way to end the initial chapter.


That's what actually happened this summer.
We'd seen the last of hamburger soup and peach pie and tire swings. But we'd seen the start of something, too.
The beginning of the End of Days.

Now, that could mean anything. Just anything. So I had to read ahead. I could give more examples, ones containing more drama, but I think you understand my meaning here.

Use the spices of your overall story at the end of each scene and chapter to flavor the silver lining, flaws and all. 

Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Writer's Wednesday: MC Goal Checklist (+ contest)

Self-portrait by AlkieBiter

I've been reading The Plot Whisperer by Martha Alderson and I'm getting some great information out of it.  So I thought I'd share the goal checklist with all of you.  I found this checklist particularly difficult before starting my novel, but I think forcing myself to answer these questions will make my main character stronger right from the get-go.

By the way, MC = main character.

*  What does the MC most desire?
*  What does she care about?
*  What strongly motivates her?
*  What is the MC moving toward?
*  What keeps her going, focus, committed when the going gets rough?
*  What needs to be done, saved, protected, solved, fixed, achieved, figured out, helped that she and only she can do?
*  What is her plan to accomplish that?

The question in bold I think is particularly important.  It made me realize that it's not enough simply for your MC to push through, but that she has to have a reason for doing so.

Working on answering these questions helped me more clearly define my next novel before I got started.  Have you ever done a checklist like this before starting to write?  Do you think this one will be useful to you?  Anything else you'd add?
 
CONTEST ~

Please stop by my blog - The Daily Harrell - to enter to win an autographed ARC of The Syndicate from Shelena Shorts.  Open Internationally.

Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Writerly Wednesday ~ Exercise

CJ, the youngest of my four children, made his First Communion and Confirmation last weekend. Yes, my family is Catholic, but this is not a post about religion or belief in God. It's about persistence, exercise, and constant exposure.

The Bishop of our State resided over the ceremony and used the theme of sports to help the children understand the concept of faith in action, i.e., living a good life. In order to do this and grow as a person, he emphasized that one needs to exercise faith often and offered suggestions to accomplish this such as helping others, making the right choices even if they're not popular, etc...

The same theory that applies to honing skills as an athlete, a person in society, an actor, a singer, and many other arenas also applies to writing. I've spoken to many writers who love participating in flash fiction or writing exercises floating amid the blogosphere. You can find some great ones in craft books on the art of writing, too. These challenge our way of thinking and even our individual approach to writing.

Some instructors will encourage one method, while another teacher presents a different way. Some writers post visual imagery to conjure our writing gene and push us to think, try a new way or hone the way we currently come up with ideas and formulate them in ink.

I love writing shorties - fiction under 500 words or so. This method challenges me to brainstorm an idea, formulate and map it out, develop arcs for a character(s)--emotional, theme, story, subplots--and create an intriguing, plausible storyworld in a very limit space. Slowly, the more I write these, using similar methods over and over and over, the more natural it all feels. In the case of the writing game, repetition is a good thing.

For these same reasons, I began writing picture books about a year and a half ago. Most PBs are expressed between 300 to 600 words, some are a bit longer. But most do not exceed 1,000 words. Once again, within these constraints, the writer must include character development, progression of inner/outer/story arcs, and build an interesting world to capture the reader's attention. That is a small about of space in which to accomplish a true story. But it's done everyday.


What do you think about writing exercises? How do you hone your writing skills?

Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Writer's Wednesday - Finding Sanctuary

We used to do a post every week on finding sanctuary.  Now that we don't do a weekly post, I thought it was time to revisit some of the ways that we can work sanctuary into our writing time.  (Yes, I'm all about multi-tasking.)
Here are some ideas for making your writing time more enjoyable:

* Take your laptop and write beside a crackling fire

*  Burn a candle in your favorite scent

*  Make yourself a steaming cup of hot cocoa (come on, you know you secretly want one too every time you make it for the kids)

*  Wrap one of those heat-able wraps or blankets around your shoulders to release tension while typing

*  Make a new playlist full of your favorite mellow songs

*  Close your e-mail folder and/or turn off your internet, so you don't know or aren't able to access the many possible distractions that linger

*  Consider writing long hand. The extra time it takes to write down the words will give you brain additional time to be creative and you may find things just flow when you move away from the computer.

What other ideas and tips can you share for making writing time just a little more relaxing?

Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Writer's Wednesday ~ Stolen Moments

Borrowed from DeviantArt

When do you make time for your writing? For your reading?  (We all know it's critical to stay on top of the market by reading within our genres.)

If you're a scheduler, than I have no tips for you.  I would never follow my own schedule.  Deadlines sometimes help, but only if they're real (like a CP is waiting on my work). For me, what I need are moments of stolen time.  I don't know why ... maybe I feel like I'm sneaking in something special by writing when it's not expected.  But here are some ideas to help you work writing time into your day that you didn't otherwise knew you had:

*  Take your laptop or book with you to your kid's activities. Do you really need to watch their sixty-seventh attempt at the perfect cartwheel during gymnastics? What about those times your kid is just warming the bench or practicing?  These are my most favorite stolen moments for some reason.  It's like multi-tasking at its finest.

*  Email your WIP to yourself at the office.  During lunch, can you pop it open and add a couple hundred words, then mail it back to your home account. Not only did you find some spare time, you also build in a backup save of your work in case your computer crashes. You can always retrieve the old email from one of the servers.

*  I usually can't make myself go to bed any earlier to read, but I can make use of that "twilight" time before I crash to get in another chapter.  I've found a book light has helped tremendously with this one, because now I don't feel guilty about coming in and turning on the light next to hubby.

*  Get one of the reading Apps for your phone so you always have your book with you.  Why bother with magazines when you're waiting in the doctor's office?  Your current read is as close as your cell phone.  You don't even have to remember your e-reader or book.


So, those are my little tricks for slipping in reading and writing time.  What are yours?

Wednesday, December 07, 2011

Depth in Streets, Avenues, & Alleyways

Characters can be so much fun to work with. That's my favorite part of writing. I tend to get a flash of an idea for a plot, and where that comes from no one knows. Do-do-do... Usually, immediately after that, an image pops into my head. Sometimes it's detailed, while other times it's not.
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I may see hair color or a simple crook at the corner of said character's grin. A scarf may suddenly appear around the character's neck, or I may get the sense of shyness or even a tendency to back away as if he/she is hiding something. Maybe running or avoiding.

There are many ways in which a writer can add depth to a character. I'm going to focus on dressing the character as if he/she is a blank mannequin. We'll leave story, plot and other elements for another post.

  1. Physical Features: this is an avenue that can take all sorts of directions and usually is one of the first to direct a reader as to who the character is. There is so much fun to have here. Take chances with these. We never know the links we can create throughout the story by adding a simple nose ring or maybe blue eyes.
  2. Chosen Physical Appears: basically I'm referring to a character's fashion sense. Each of us has individuality when it comes to our choice of attire. Think carefully about putting those combat boots on the debutante girl and why she'd wear them. Is she trying to tick off her parents. Or maybe she's involved in some secret society. Either way, risk it but have a reason.
  3. Background: this is the simple one, yet hard all in the same thought. We can do anything with our character's pasts as long as it leads the reader to the beginning of THIS story, the one you're writing right now. Some information you dream up might be the most fantastical and interesting elements to a character, yet it does not fit or add to the story. It does not move the story forward. Leave it out, but make sure you save it for another story. You never know when it might come in handy.
  4. Likes and Dislikes: just like each of us, our characters need to enjoy and/or avoid aspects of their world, whether you've created a new world or not. Give them a dislike that's challenging and bounces of their world, making it harder for them to move forward. 
  5. Emotional Baggage: I HEART this part of deepening a character and could write a series about it! You can take the psyche of a character and intertwine it within the plot, subplots, interactions with secondary characters, their world, and all four of the above elements. The choices you make here to deepen the character will have a profound affect on the entire story. Emotions move, motivate, and inspire plot.
How do you imagine your characters? Does it come in a flash? Do you outline their characteristics or do a character interview?

Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Writer's Wednesday: Where in the World are Crit Partners?


On my own blog Monday I wrote about how awesome my crit partners are and how it's essential to have a good working relationship with your crit partners because they tend to do much more than just critique your work. 

Well, throughout yesterday, I got a few emails and a comment on the post asking me where I found my CPs and is there anywhere I recommend going for them.  And it got me thinking that it might be worthwhile to do a post about that. I know when I was looking for CPs, I was at a loss to where to find one.  So, I hope you'll bear with me with this post.

First some upfront caveats, I'm sure there are many, many other options than the ones I'm going to be listing, but I've personally used each and everyone of these websites and had good experiences with them, so that's why I'm mentioning them.  As with all things personal, your mileage may vary. 

Tred carefully with finding new partners.  Make sure you're a good fit and be very explicit of what you're looking for.  Also, it's a good idea to find out how thick your skin is and what kind of crit you're ready for.  In the beginning, my skin was really thin and the tiniest bit of criticism hurt, but I gritted my teeth and now i'm fairly certain I can take a harsh crit.  Although, I will admit, I've had crits recently that have made me cry.  So, know your tolerance level.

Okay, that being said, lets get into the good stuff. The list of websites I used to find my own crit partners.

Absolutewrite.com--This is an excellent place for learning the ropes about all sides of publishing including finding beta readers and crit partners.  They're also great for researching agents/publishers and everything in between.  They DO have a place to "show your work," but make sure you're ready for all kinds of critiques.  I have found that while they're intentions are in the right place and most have great advice, they tend to be a bit harsh in their crits. 

YaLitchat--a lot of you already know about this website, but for those of you who don't. it's a website designed specifically for writers of YA. They have a wide range of members there. From newbies to NYT best-selling authors, agents, and editors.  They're a great resource for finding writing friends and CPs, (which is where I found all the lovely ladies on this blog.  :) ) and they have places to help perfect query letters and synopsis', not to mention the first few pages of your MS.  They also have actual teens willing to read and give feedback, among many, many more things. I'm still finding my way around there, but even with only the free membership you get a lot of great things.


Verla Kay's blueboards--It's similar to absolutewrite, but stricter on what is allowed there and what's not.  Which is excellent, IMHO, because you won't run into some of the train wrecks that can take place on the AW boards.  But this, like yalitchat is only for children's books writers. The people here are again from all aspects of writing.  From newbies, to NYT bestsellers, agents, editors, and everyone in between.  And EVERYONE is awesomely nice.  You really coudln't find a greater group of people. 


And lastly, weBook.  Now I know this is a display site, so there are more caveats with this one than the others.  I got a really great reaction to the parts of stories I had placed here when I was first starting and so in that regard, it was really great for me because I needed the boost to my self-esteem.  I also found my best friend and first CP who showed me the ropes of writing. I found a lot of great writers there actually, but they've made some changes to things since I left after getting my agent. And I don't agree with a lot of them. There is something there called agent-in-box. I HIGHLY recommend NOT using that service if you're querying. There's no need.  Everything you'd be paying them to do, you can do for free on your own.  Also, if you do place some of your work online, be careful.  There are a lot of things that can go wrong with that, so just keep that in mind.

Okay, this post has gotten a bit long, so I'll end here, but feel free to leave me any questions you have in the comments.  I'll be more than happy to answer them.  And if I get a lot of the same questions, I'll probably do a post on it, so please feel free to ask me anything.

Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Writer's Wednesday: Forming Your Own Publishing House

As many of you know, I'm in the throes of self-publishing my novel.  I had MANY author friends (including my Oasis Sisters) to lean on for help and guidance, so I thought I'd share some of what I've learned with any of you considering the same route.

One of the first things you may be wondering if you're thinking about self-publishing is why some authors take the time to set up a "publishing house," which is really nothing more than themselves.

Why bother with this, you may ask?  A number of reasons.

*  Added credibility.  Your publisher on Goodreads and Amazon won't be listed as CreateSpace or whoever else you use to print your novels.  You get to fill a publisher's name in the blank.  (With so many big houses having lesser-known imprints these days, most readers probably won't take time to distinguish you from them.)

*  You can purchase your own ISBN number.  Many companies that want to sell you an ISBN charge a huge mark-up.  The process is pretty painless and it's worth it to DIY.  Plus, you are not truly the publisher unless you purchase the ISBN yourself.

*  When you're setting up accounts with Amazon or Lightning Source, etc., they want a business name.  My Amazon user ID (like a stock symbol) is based on my publishing name, not Jessie Harrell.  It's my belief that having a publishing name makes the application process for these companies easier.

*  When you're ready to put your second, third, fourth, novels out there, you can publish them under a unified banner.  Once your "company" has multiple titles, it will be easier to get into the catalogs for Expended Distribution or be considered for purchase by libraries, etc.

*  Vanity.  If I'm being honest, I like that there's a publisher's name on the spine of my book and on the title page.  I endeavored to make my novel as closely resemble a traditionally-published novel as I could, and this just made it one step closer for me.


In case you're curious, my publishing name is Mae Day Publishing (can you tell I thought I'd need rescue?)  To do this, I registered my fictitious name with the State and ran an inexpensive ad in the local paper.  Blamo.  Now I'm a publisher.  I even got really cutesy and drew myself a logo -- this is my boss' dog, Mae, the paper-eating pooch who was really the inspiration for the name.
Got any questions?  I'm happy to drop by and answer them throughout the day.  Writers helping writers -- I'm just paying it forward.

Anyone have any other really compelling reasons to create your own publishing company before you self publish? Please share!

Wednesday, October 19, 2011

The Art of Conflict

For the most part, when I begin writing a new story of any kind or length I keep in mind what draws me into a tale. I think about characters, natural effects, inner workings, motivations/purpose, misunderstandings, settings/world building, and the physical.

So what enhances the elements I listed about?  Tension. Suspense. Mystery. Questioning. 

Basically CONFLICT. The intensity or subtlety of conflict surely varies from scene to scene, chapter to chapter, story to story. But what's most important is that you use it.

So how do we thread conflict throughout our stories without being too obvious about it?

Let's break it down into seven parts, because I like the number seven. I can halve it perfectly, placing three on one side and three on the other.

1. COC or Characteristics of Character - develop personality traits of characters that differ from each other. Put them in opposition. Use one character's demeanor against another's. Character changes due to past experiences can butt heads with the current reality, making for great tension and suspense.

2. Natural Effects - differences in gender are always useful and can be fun to play with. The weather or a specific plight in your world building can work, too. Family dynamics such as parents, other siblings, and extended family or friends can also be used to deepen a story line, which can take on a new life if used in subplots.

3. Inner Workings - this is where a story can really take off, drawing the reader inside the character and making them care. That is so important. Make them care. (Exercise to do while writing: think of your own life & experiences. What emotional conflicts have you or someone close to you experienced? What about mental struggles. For instance, the kid in school who just can't grasp the concept of mathematics or despises gym class. Other interesting areas in our inner realm could be self-doubt, guilt, pompousness, no-drive, depression, fear...we could go on and on.)

Middle/Balance Conflict 

7. Motivation/Purpose - you might think this could be listed under Inner and it could. But I wanted to separate it because of its importance. A character and a story plot must have a reason for existing in the first place or once again...who cares? And who decides on said motivation? The writer. So ask yourself question like:

  • what are my motivations for writing this story? Do I have a purpose, a lesson to teach? Am I sending a greater message?

3. Misunderstandings - Does it frustrate you when a writer sets up subplots to simply confuse or muddle the main plot, motivations, and purpose of the story? It sure does me, but it is extremely effective to keep me reading or watching. NOTE: but it must have a purpose and move the story forward.

2. Settings/World Building - Setting and world building can give imbalance to a story when need be, creating a sense of urgency, heightening the tension, and adding to the suspense. Taking two characters, who are already at odds with each other because of any of the above, and transplanting them in an unfamiliar environment can show character weaknesses and flaws.

1. The Physical - it could be a knockdown fist fight or a heated argument. You might use a group of people rioting or kids at a school pep rally or event gone wrong. Conflict can also be physically found on the romantic front, especially when it appears one half of the couple is playing hard to get or genially doesn't like the other. Mix in some physical meddling from another character, and you could have one heck of a conflict.

When developing conflict, remember it's a gradual succession of building blocks to keep the reader engaged. You have an infinite number of blocks to play with. Use them.

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Writer's Wednesday: Soggy middles



We’ve covered beginnings. We’ve covered endings But we always seem to pass over that middle.  But it’s just as important, right?  So why do writers skip over talking about them?  Because they suck!  LOL.

By far, I’d say the middle is always the toughest for me to keep writing.  With the beginning, while the most difficult for me to get right, I’m usually excited to start writing again, so I breeze right through it.  The end, I’m excited I’m thisclose to finishing, so I can breeze through that, too (relatively speaking of course.)  But those middles?  Yeah. Hate ‘em.  LOL.

It’s always at this point where I think I suck (and probably do) and I’m boring and my characters are awful. The plot doesn’t work. Blah. Blah. Blah. The middles make me want to give up writing, color my hair, get plastic surgery done on my face and move out to some distant island never to be heard from again.

Even with plotting and self-set deadlines, the middles are the pits for me and it’s taken me this long to figure out why.  Mostly it’s because by this time, the newness of the MS has worn off.  It’s like when you got that new doll or videogame as a kid. 

For days you carted it around with you everywhere. You played with it constantly. From the minute you woke up to the minute you went to sleep that toy wasn’t far from you, physically and mentally.  But then, the newness wears off. You’re tired of thinking about it. There’s a different maybe newer toy that you want to play with more. And so you just want to put it off to the side, but your mom (or other) spent a lot of money on this new toy and she wants to see you play with it because otherwise she’s “never going to buy you another toy again” because she wants to get her money out of it.  So you force yourself to play with it, dreading just SEEING it. 

Sound familiar?  Well, that’s how the middles feel for me. The newness has worn off, BUT I’ve invested so much into it already I have to keep going for it to pay off.   I want something to show for all the hard work I’ve done up until that point.  So I open the document like a good girl every morning and force myself to write until eventually I realize I’ve either finished or I’m thisclose to finishing and I’m excited all over again.

So, what’s the secret to getting through those soggy middles?  Keep writing.  Don’t think about what you’re writing (too much anyway.  Even though it helps if you know where you’re going.)

I know.  Easier said than done, right?  Well, the best thing I’ve found for me is to do writing challenges with other writers.  I personally like the #1k1hr sprints on twitter, but I’ve heard the write or die or word war sprints work just as well. 

The reason these work so well is that humans are naturally competitive so it gives you that spark to write again and the point isn’t necessarily to write good, but to write a lot.  So quantity over quality.  By doing that, you don’t start second guessing yourself.  You just write and worry about what needs to be changed, cut, or added to later.

In other words, it allows you to keep playing, even when all you want to do is put that toy back on the shelf and never see it again.

So Q4U, what do YOU do to get past those soggy middles? 

Wednesday, September 07, 2011

Writer's Wednesday: Self-Editing 101

First off -- I'm so glad that our Oasis has returned.  We hope you enjoy the new line-up and our new contributor, Larissa Hardesty.

**Image snatched from Monbcn on DeviantArt**

For our first writer's Wednesday, I wanted to start with three basic self-editing tips that I see with some frequency.  I'm reading a self-published novel right now that has an absolutely AWESOME story line, but the editing issues are rampant.  I also see these mistakes cropping up in the First Pages group at #yalitchat.  Whether you're subbing to an agent or editor -- or going it on your own -- being able to self-edit is a critical skill.

Some common mistakes I'm seeing (and these are pretty basic, btw):

1.  Punctuation around dialog.  This is correct: "I like dogs," said Abbie.
     This is not correct: "I like dogs." said Abbie.

     This is correct: "I like dogs." Abbie grinned.
     This is not correct: "I like dogs," Abbie grinned.

     Can you see the difference between the two?  In the first example, what follows is a dialog tag.  The most common examples are said and asked.  If you're adding it before or after dialog, the correct pronunciation to use is a comma.  In the second example, what follows the dialog is a second sentence describing Abbie's movement.  This is classic showing.  Instead of telling your reader who is speaking, you're able to show by adding in a descriptive motion just before or after the dialog.  Since this is not a dialog tag (and it's not, because grinning is not a way in which to speak), the correct pronunciation is a period.
     
2.  Using Contractions in Dialog.  I actually stopped reading a self-pubbed novel with a good story line because all of the teen characters spoke in long, complete sentences.  The author never used contractions.  Now, I'm guilty of this myself in first drafts.  We've been taught for so long not to use contractions in our writing, it tends to come out that way even if we're thinking in contractions in our head.

Fix this when you're editing.

Read the dialog out loud.  Have beta readers who will actually give you honest feedback read it.  Do something.  Because I don't know any teens who would say something like: "I am going to college this fall. It is going to be great."  Instead, it'd be something more like: "I'm going to college this fall. It'll be great."  Same message, totally different delivery.

3.  Spelling.  Now, before my beta readers start throwing stones at me, I confess that this is one of my own fatal flaws. I'm a horrid speller and my word processing program, Pages, actually gave up on me and won't find the errors for me anymore.  (Yes, it's that bad.)  But a friend recently sent me a list of free spell checking sites that can scan your document for spelling errors.  So, I'm sharing.  Free is good.  Spelled correctly is better.
http://www.autocrit.com/wizardformpage.php
http://www.spellchecker.net/grammar/

http://www.grammar-monster.com/index.html <-- not a spell-checker, but answers all of the common grammar questions.  Really cool place!
publish button http://www.inetword.com/
http://shutterb.org/
http://www.editpad.org/
http://writeboard.com/
http://www.makeuseof.com/tag/writely-online-word-processor/


Though the sites listed above are free there is also software that you can purchase. Whitesmoke is great software that is compatible to Microsoft word 2007 and 2010. It is most certainly affordable:
http://www.whitesmoke.com/



So, those are my basic editing tips for the day.  Anyone want to add to the list of basics?  Or have feedback on the freebie spell-checkers?

Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Alternative Publishing Routes: Self-Publishing Realty Check

A couple of Fridays ago, I posted an interview with Heather Howland, one of the editors at Entangled Publishing.  She told us all about her small press and it's big plans.  (See interview here.)  But for those of you who are for some reason leery of the small presses, I thought you'd like to hear about self-publishing from a pair who has just journeyed that route.  Meet Renee and Harrell (Hal) Turner.  This husband & wife team writes under the super-secret (yeah, not-so-much) pen name: Renee Harrell.  (And they are no relation to me, I might add.)  If you've ever been curious what it's like to self-publish, read on. You may or may not be surprised.  (And let me just say, I am surprised to hear stories like this!  I apologize in advance that this is a bit longer than usual, but it's all interesting IMHO.)
(They use these oils in place of pictures - I'm already amused.)


Tell us a bit about your publishing history.

Can we share a little about our writing history, instead? For years, we did very little writing for the commercial market. Then, Harrell discovered a book packager looking for writers for the company’s ongoing YA mystery series and asked Renée if she’d like to work with him on a novel. We wrote an outline, sent it in, and received our first book contract. A few months later, we collected our fee, the book was published, and we learned that work-for-hire writers are frequently rewritten by their editors. The storyline remained intact but there was a plot twist in the novel that just didn’t make any sense....

[Interjection here -- I naively would think that once you've been picked up to write a story by a book packager, you're basically "in." Not so, apparently.] 

Since we’d already written one YA mystery novel, we decided to write another but, this time, we wanted to create our own characters. Our heroine wouldn’t be super smart (because we can’t relate to people who are super smart), she’d have some body issues (because we can relate to body issues), she’d only have a couple of close friends and she’d have a close and loving relationship with her one surviving parent. Ann Lippens wouldn’t be edgy or dark, she’ be a more like normal person: Not anti-Miss Popularity but not really Miss Unpopular, either. In other words, a lot like we were in high school.

As the book grew, we added some paranormal elements, some horror elements, a twist of Jack the Ripper (although, really, we think most of our audience will miss it) and a touch of romance to the book, because we like those things. When we finished the novel, we contacted a handful of agents. Happily, we timed the market well and three of the five agents quickly asked to see the full manuscript. By the end of a week, we were signed with a solid and respected agency. Four months later, the book was submitted to all of the big publishing houses and we signed a huge contract and now we’re famous.

It would have been exactly like that except that all of the big houses passed on the opportunity to give us a basket of money. (The folks at Penguin said nice things about our work but they didn’t offer a contract. We still feel kindly toward the people at Penguin.) A few weeks later, our agent disappeared – or, at least, we think that must be what happened, since she no longer answered our emails and never called us again. Several months after that, we formally ended our relationship with her. We’ve since met two other writers who had a nearly identical experience with this agent. 

Meanwhile, our YA novel, whis•pers, was back in our hands. We spoke with an agent who told us the manuscript was “cooked” and we should “forget about it” but we liked our story. So we looked around for an electronic publisher of Young Adult novels. There’s more interest these days but, in 2009, not so much. We found someone we liked, signed a contract...and things went badly. 

A year later, we asked for our rights back, they were given to us, and we changed the name of the book to Something Wicked. We decided, then, to publish the novel ourselves. 

What fueled that decision?

It wasn’t our first preference, not at all. If Something Wicked had a Scholastic sticker on it, we’d be delighted. When traditional publishing didn’t work out, and our agent decided we weren’t part of the in-crowd, we were stuck. Even then, we didn’t want to publish the thing ourselves. It’s too much work! So we went with an electronic publisher, someone who could pay for an editor, a cover artist, a tech guy or girl, a team of publicists....but, as we said, things went badly. Here’s that story:

The Acquisitions Editor loved our book, said delightful things, and – left the company before a new editor could be assigned. A few months passed and we drifted about, editor-less, wondering what would happen next. (So we continued writing other novels.) Finally, we were assigned our first, official editor. Before the book would really be edited, we were asked to remove redundant words and words the editor herself did not like to read in books. We did this. Then our editor left the company for personal reasons.

A few more weeks drifted away. We wrote and sold a spicy romance novella (just to see if we could) and a new editor came on board. She didn’t like our prologue – prologues aren’t popular these days, not with anyone, but our opening is vital to the story – but we fought and kept our beginning, worked on eliminating more “bad” words...and then this editor abruptly left the company. 

Our publication date drew closer. Our publisher sent us a jpeg of the novel’s cover and a friend asked why we were using someone else’s image on our novel. Turns out, the design was so similar to the cover of a best-selling Dean Koontz novel that it made us cringe. We notified the publisher and she agreed to make some changes. Weeks away from our publication date, we were assigned a new editor. This gentleman had never been an editor but, ever willing, decided to rewrite the beginning of the novel. Without telling us. And surprised us further by chopping out some important bits. This was not okay with us. 

We protested, things grew a little heated, and we asked to be released from our contract. The publisher agreed and returned all of our rights. She didn’t have to do this and we appreciate it greatly – and that’s why we would prefer not to mention the publisher by name. We think she tries hard and this period of time was a rough stretch for her company. We’ve talked to another of her writers and his experience was much more satisfying.

It was after all of this that we decided to publish the book ourselves.
  
For anyone considering self-publishing, what should they know going in?

We wondered ourselves so, a few months ago, we did an experiment. We put together a three story collection of science fiction stories (called After Things Went Bad), Renée grabbed a stock photo and designed a cover, and we had it on Amazon in a couple of days. 

We learned, it’s not that hard to publish your own book. Which is a shame, really, because you don’t have to be very committed to do it poorly but you have to be really committed to do it right. There are all kinds of resources out there to help you. Dean Wesley Smith, for example, has a whole series on being your own publisher. 

Know, too, that there’s absolutely no caché in being self-published, your family and friends really don’t want to buy your book, no matter what they say, and you’ll probably be disappointed by the royalties you receive. After Things Went Bad has yet to collect enough money to pay for the stock photo we used.  

Was this a lot of work? For example, did you have to hire your own editor, find your own cover designer, learn how to do digital typesetting, etc.?
  
It isn’t that hard to make your book available on-line but it was a lot of work to get Something Wicked ready for publication. 
There’s dozens of how-to-format your book blogsites and plenty of tech-savvy people willing to do it for you (usually for under $100) if you can’t or don’t want to make the effort. It’s a little tougher to prepare a print version, Createspace or Lulu, but still very doable. That’s how it seemed to us, anyway, and we are not computer masters by any stretch of the imagination.

An experienced editor runs $1500 and up, for a typical YA novel. We know because we checked. Because we couldn’t afford either of the people we wanted, we turned to fellow writers and beta readers for help. Of course, our novel had already been semi-edited by then but we still trimmed nearly ten percent of the word count to tighten and improve the story.

For a cover, there are cheaper people available but the designers we like start at $300 - $350 for a basic layout. (We approached an artist to do the cover for After Things Went Bad but he wanted $2000!!!)  (Let us say that again: !!!) Our son, Matthew, is a graphic designer so we asked him to build the Something Wicked cover for us. He did a great job and the paperback is lovely. 
 How are you planning on marketing SW?

We’re going to rely on the kindness of strangers. Really.

When we signed our contract with the e-publisher, she told us we should anticipate selling thousands of digital downloads. To help us do this, she wanted us to be on every social networking site available. We did as she asked but we also contacted several of the writers she’d published. They were quite open with us, telling us the sales for most of their novels were in the two digits. Not always the high two digits, either. It was discouraging. 

So we thought we’d try a different approach: We’d write a story we’d like to read, make it complete in itself but open to a sequel – Something Evil – because a series builds a readership and because we want to know what happens next, give our novel a good cover and try to build some sort of awareness of the book’s existence. If we can get a few reviews (from kind strangers, see above), we’ll be happy because somebody, somewhere, may be interested enough in what we’ve written to download the story or buy the book. If they like it enough, they may swing back for the next one...and the one after that. 

It’s very much a “tortoise” philosophy. We don’t have to win the royalties race with this novel but, over time, we hope to do well enough to continue the line of mysteries.

Would you do it over again? Why or why not?

Absolutely and here’s why: At the end of the day, we’ve created and produced a book we like. Unlike our work-for-hire assignment, we won’t find “surprise” additions to the story. Unlike our experience with the e-publisher, we get to use a cover we like and we can keep the words we want to use in our mystery. It’s wonderful to be able to tell your own story your own way.
  
Still, things may change in the future. Our science fiction novel comes out in September from Proxima Books (UK). Five months before publication, they’re discussing ways to raise awareness about our book. We’re impressed. We’re not five-months-in-advance kind of people. We can barely keep the weekend in sight.

Bonus question: You’re stranded on a desert oasis and you can only bring one novel (that someone else has written!) – what do you pick?

Renée: Irving Stone’s Lust for Life. Vincent Van Gogh fascinates me and I’ve been meaning to read the book for months. I keep getting distracted. But put me on a desert oasis….
Harrell: I’d grab Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain. Because the book is one of my favorites, and it’s fairly long (might need the paper!), and it’s written by a guy with a pseudonym.

To learn more about Renee and Hal, visit their website (which is quite humorous) and you can read my review of Something Wicked here.  And there you have it folks.  The low down on why one couple decided to self-publish and the unfortunate events in the publishing world that led up to their decision.  Did you learn anything new or surprising? What are your thoughts on self-publishing?  
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