For instance, I normally write in 1st person present tense. So I’m going to write mine in 3rd person past tense. This is a wonderful exercise to do when you’re stuck, because it frees your mind a bit and it isn’t stuck in the same old rut. I don't know how many times it's helped me move forward.
The stranger peered over his shoulder, before quickly stepping into the building. Elle knew for that reason alone that he was the one she was looking for, but still she hesitated. What if he wasn’t really the one? If not, she’d get in so much trouble with her uncle. However, if he was, then she’d show her uncle once and for all he needed her. And that she wasn’t just some fashionista with a chip the size of New Vegas on her shoulder.She straightened her shoulders, adjusted her skirt so it showed just a bit more of her tanned thighs, and made the decision. She was going in that store, and she was going after her guy. He was the one. No one else would have a reason to be in that store at this time. And she’d get the answers her Uncle needed from him. Failure wasn’t an option and there was no doubt in her mind that she’d win. After all, no one could resist a pretty face. And she had the prettiest in town.
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